Headlines make a story standout
There are a lot of bad headlines out there and a lot of good ones, too. But it’s the goodies that grab reporters when you’re pitching a story. Write a ho-hum headline on a news release or in a subject line and you’re sure to get a Zzzzzzzzz response.
Headline writing tip No. 1: Don’t write the headline until you’ve written the story. Often, you’ll come up with a great one during the creative process. Or it may hit you like a ton of bricks just as you’re falling asleep the night before your big pitch.
Headline writing tip No. 2: Consider your words carefully. Using words and phrases with double meanings can be clever or easily misinterpreted, so choose them wisely. A couple examples:
Headline: Farmer Bill Dies in House
The story: A proposed law has failed to survive the legislative process in the house.
Alternative interpretation: A farmer named Bill died.
Headline: School jumpstarts class that puts students in the driver’s seat
The story: a small, rural school resurrects its driver’s education program
Alternative interpretation: None. This headline was an award-winner.
Written by Jeneca Jones Tagged in: Tips of the Trade on Jan 21, 2011










